What do you think about this poem? It’s a long one, I know.?
May 7, 2010 by
Filed under garden wall fountains
Come, Oh come lead me sweetly
Over hill and mountain
To your springs and your fountains of life and your waters
I want to come with you now
As we do
We leave behind all that was
To take up that which you have desired
O rushing wind of your wild spirit
Come upon this flame in my heart
And bring forth a most warm and bright flame
Let your passion overtake me
That I may search once more
To be wherever you are
Wherever you take me
That is the one place I long to be
Nothing more
No where else
No desire can match such sweet passions
Now placed in this heart
Now what is this?
But your desire too
Now what is this but now our joy
Increasing revelation of our hearts only for one another
Such sweet rain overfreshing us as we dance
Beneath its falling drops
I have waited my life not knowing
Till this day did come
I would have wasted away to nothing
But your love revealed it
Sustained my heart and brought life to its desert climes
And now together we enjoy the sumptuous fruit of love
Reaped from the fertile paradise that our hearts have become
Your love satisfies oh my beloved
Your love captures in one all hungers and all thirsts and all lacks
In one hand you overwhelm all deficiencies
I am overtaken by this great wave
This wall of love falls over me
Crushing all insecurity and I am swept away
Absolutely confident in this love
You have surrounded me with love at all turns
How could I not but remember this love?
O sweet passion if is good
And your love goes down smoothly like the sweetest of wines
Your love intoxicates me
I lose myself entirely in you
And find myself anew
As one who has not seen before
One call, one sounding of your voice
And desperation comes forth in me
To flee here and seek you
To be with you always where you are
So I ask would you speak to me softly?
Would you let your heart cry forth its desire?
That my heart, my very being would choose to cry back
I have grown weary in this blind waste
In this darkened desert scape
Would you draw me back and lead me to the warmth of your light?
To the sweet fragrant garden of your heart
I love your garden
It should always be my home
I love the heart of you
I must see you
I must have you
I long for you
What else can be said at so beautiful a beloved as you
But that I should have you
But that my heart is enthralled that you should have me
With all that is in you
Pull us and draw us into tighter embrace
Wow that is a long one!! But Very very good. I was intrigued. At first I thought it was coming off trashy but I am older. ha! But I think you are a really great writer!! I write poetry as well. A different kind I must say I think you should check out poetry.com and also some other poetry areas on the internet. you may get some good results. Keep it up!! I enjoyed it.