Teenage Poet. Critique? only constructive please?

These are Poems I wrote, I know that not all of them are as good as others, but i really want to know how I am doing for a young teenage Poet.
tell me your favorite or some criticism or something that is hepful
/Paranoia/
Shadows
Little ghosts crawling on the walls
Humanoid reflections waiting to feed
A muffled whisper, a [...]

critique my writing please?

Sometimes i guess i hate getting inspired cause i leave off a really good story i had started before and start a new one. This was written within like the last fifteen minutes [my microsoft is crashing and my mouse wont work on it so i couldnt correct my errors sorry]
Sorry if its long…
Sitting atop [...]

Will you be pleased when summer arrives. Critique or comments welcome, thanks?

The Walled Victorian Garden at Sandroyd
I sit in peace, reflect and think,
And praise the lilies white and pink,
At rest on rounded craft shaped leaves,
Afloat on water stirred by breeze.
A fountain percolates a flow,
Cool crystal sinks to depths below.
I’m charmed, my clear eyes turn and gaze,
On gardens formed for richer days.
I pause and fancy I can [...]